Today's ad is from Dr. Umut Zereyak, the famous Turkish surgeon.
Text of the ad:
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Meet Dr. Umut Zereyak, an expert in cosmetic surgery. Contact us today to schedule your first consultation and answer all your questions.
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The first thing we see when we look at an advertisement is a beautiful woman. Smart move. People are naturally attracted to beautiful things.
So Dr. Umut, at the very beginning, does an excellent job - he caught our attention.
Now he has the opportunity to build on that. To tell us why his service is so special and how our life will become better.
But. BUT.
All we got was:
Hi, I am Dr. Umut and I am an expert...
Not sexy at all, right?
How to fix doctor's marketing
He makes 2 mistakes here:
(1) It does not give us any information about its offer
Our ad must interest our customer so much that he decides to listen to us.
(2) He immediately asks us to call him for a free consultation
Which is too much of the threshold, when you reach to cold audience.
How To Make Your Ad Sexy
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Get your confidence and beauty back within 2 weeks!
If you would like to
Lose weight,
Rejuvenate your face,
Increase your breasts,
If you want to beautify any part of your body, we can help.
Doctor Umut Z. has helped over 2000 women to finally achieve the look they deserve...
By clicking on the link you can see some of his happy patients.
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